{"id":7696,"date":"2020-05-26T16:45:37","date_gmt":"2020-05-26T08:45:37","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.ivy-way.com\/4-sentences-to-avoid-in-your-college-essays\/"},"modified":"2020-05-27T11:35:22","modified_gmt":"2020-05-27T03:35:22","slug":"4-sentences-to-avoid-in-your-college-essays","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blog.ivy-way.com\/cn\/4-sentences-to-avoid-in-your-college-essays\/","title":{"rendered":"\u5207\u8bb0\uff01\u8fd94\u4e2a\u6700\u5e38\u7528\u7684\u53e5\u5b50\uff0c\u7edd\u5bf9\u4e0d\u8981\u51fa\u73b0\u5728\u4f60\u7684\u5927\u5b66\u4f5c\u6587\u4e2d\uff01"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p><a href=\"\/?p=744\">Common Application\uff08\u5171\u540c\u7533\u8acb\u8868\uff09\u5728\u4eca\u5e74\u4e00\u6708\u5df2\u7d93\u516c\u5e032020-2021\u5e74\u7533\u8acb\u8868\u4f5c\u6587\u7684\u984cCommon 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